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Greetings,

this article is based on the recently released X-Men: The Last Stand film. It's relatively new and thus we are mainly looking for advice concerning things like: the scope, the structure, how should we expand it, etc. (Although any advice is appreciated.) Please keep in mind Good Article and Feature Article criteria when making suggestions. Thank you.--P-Chan 02:17, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

All pictures should have a rationale of fair use written for them. -- Underneath-it-All 02:58, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Good call. A fair-use rationale has been placed into every picture. They will be elaborated on as time goes on. Thanks for your comments! --P-Chan 03:08, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles).
  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


  • Looks good! You need to do the following:
  • Break up the trivia section and incorporate it all into the article.
  • expand any one paragraph sections
  • 3 paragraph lead
  • one more plot picture maybe? good job not having a billion pictures, but could use maybe one more.
  • more citations/references
  • copyedit for flow

Do that, you might have an FA on your hands! Judgesurreal777 17:58, 1 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments Judgesurreal. It's much appreciated!--P-Chan 06:06, 7 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I've taken care of the interlanguage and category links. Cat-five - talk 08:18, 15 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]