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Since OneShot's creation as a C-class article, I have made extensive improvements to it. I'd now like to learn what goes into creating a higher-quality article so I can contribute to the encyclopedia in a more effective manner.

Thanks, - Novov T C 00:15, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Gerald Waldo Luis

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  • Sources for the game are rather hard to come by; I only just decided that the article was notable enough when creating it. You've definitely right though, I could add a few more reviews, the extant reviews have a bit more info that could be added to the article, and I could also look for sources beyond my usual hunting grounds. - Novov T C 08:45, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • They've not from fans, but from the blogs of the game's creators. Another editor chose to add them, but I didn't remove them as the posts highlight important information that isn't found elsewhere - that Niko's gender is supposed to be ambiguous, and the different interpretations by reviewers aren't just some odd inconsistency. - Novov T C 08:45, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I've made most of the changes you described, and have commented below the respective point with rationale for the ones I've ignored. - Novov T C 08:45, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Much likewise. The last thing I'd comment on is that the cover art non-free rationale has some "n.a"s which can be filled, suggest filling it in case you wanna bring it to GA and an editor is bored enough to look at it. Meanwhile, if you can comment on my peer review, it'd be appreciated. GeraldWL 11:05, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The "n.a."s are there as those sections aren't necessary for that image. - Novov T C 10:24, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It's vital though. Just copy the ones from File:Microsoft Flight Simulator 2020 cover art.png, it's the same thing. GeraldWL 11:25, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Although the File Upload Wizard said I didn't need to add them, I've done it anyway as there's no harm in doing so. And IIRC, you've not supposed to copy them, as they should be unique for each image. - Novov T C 02:51, 20 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]