Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Bees and toxic chemicals/1
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- Result: Withdrawn Charlotte (Queen of Hearts • talk) 22:52, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
There are some uncited statements and a large use of block quotes that should probably be summarised and reduced/removed. Sources listed in "Further reading" should be incorporated into the article or removed. "Toxic plant honey" suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION and these sections probably need to be expanded. Z1720 (talk) 16:06, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
- Uncited claims: Removed or cited all of them.
- Block quotes: removed most of them, cut down the rest.
- Further reading: deleted the dead ones, ditto for 'External links'. The one remaining item has a list that may be of interest.
- Oversection: merged all subsections of 'Toxic honey' to one paragraph; this is quite enough detail for this subtopic. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:12, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- The above has resolved my concerns, I'm fine with this being declared keep. Z1720 (talk) 16:15, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
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