Jump to content

Wikipedia:Article assessment/African countries/Sudan

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Assessment Article assessment
African countries
Undergoing assessment
13 March 2006
26 March 2006
Assessments
Burundi

Cape Verde
Côte d'Ivoire
Egypt
Ethiopia
Ghana
Kenya
Madagascar
Mali
Morocco
Niger
Nigeria
Rwanda
Senegal
Sudan

Assessment of an article under the topic African countries.


Article: Sudan

Details of the assessment method can be found at the main page. Feel free to add comments when you assess an article, or use the talk page for discussion.

Review by User:Danaman5

[edit]
  • Coverage and factuality: 8

Good coverage on a lot of areas. Needs expansion in administrative divisions, geography, economy, culture, and education. Has a few inline citations, but needs more.

  • Writing style: 8

Good writing style, maybe a little more formality in some of the political sections is needed.

  • Structure: 9

Good, except that the history section could use some subdivisions. Lead needs to be lengthened.

  • Aesthetics: 8

Lots of good pictures, but some positioned awkwardly or overlapping with text.

  • Overall: 8.5

Definitely a good article, with some expansion and fixes, it will be great. --Danaman5 20:32, 15 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Review by [User:]

[edit]
  • Coverage and factuality:
  • Writing style:
  • Structure:
  • Aesthetics:
  • Overall: