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History of Christianity

Hi! You were recommended to me as someone who might be willing to help get this article to FA status. It's a big long article, but it's also a "flagship" article, and it seems to me only right that it should be among our best accordingly - but I need help. I have never had an FA. Please give it a once over if at all possible! Any and all comments will be appreciated. Thank you! Jenhawk777 (talk) 18:14, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

@Jenhawk777: That definitely is a big and important project. It's probably not the easiest article to get started with FA. Form a first look, it seems to be well written and researched. It's quite long at 12900 words prose size (see WP:SIZERULE) but may be acceptable given the scope of the topic.

A few observations:

• WP:EARWIG detects no copyvios.
• The earliest were the University of Bologna (1088), the University of Oxford (1096), and the University of Paris where the faculty was of international renown (c. 1150). needs a reference
• the paragraph starting with Luther, Huldrych Zwingli, and many others protested is unsourced
• Monter 2020 is listed in the source section but not cited in the article
• For some sources without a page number, you set the parameter "p" of the sfn template to "n/a". A better alternative might be to use the parameter "loc" instead to refer to named sections where the claims are found, e.g. "loc=§ 1. Introduction" instead of "p=n/a", or to remove the parameter altogether.
• Both Islam and crusade negatively impacted Eastern Christianity should this be "the Crusades"?
• By the sixth century, there is evidence for Christian communities replace "for" with "of"
• One of the oldest representation of Jesus replace "representation" with "representations"
• Early Christianity's system of beliefs and morality have been subject-verb agreement error: system ... have
• ordinary people that Roman culture replace "that" with "whom"
• is affirmed in the fourth century Milan edict replace "fourth century" with "fourth-century"
• First century Christian writings replace "First century" with "First-century"
• This destigmatized illness, transformed health care in Antiquity, and led remove both commas
• expressing tolerance for all religions, legalizing Christian worship add "and" before "legalizing"
• local leaders and lower level clergy were replace "lower level" with "lower-level"
• I'm not sure about the exact rules, the article keeps switching between uppercase and lower case of the terms "west"/"western" and "east"/"eastern", for example but large sections of the Western church remained unconvinced and doctrinal supremacy over the western church
• few councils that occur in the early replace "occur" with "occured"
• it was the Nestorian churches who were best replace "who" with "that"
• I think "the Crusades" should always be uppercase
• Constantinople remained its capitol and replace "capitol" with "capital"
• led folk to believe the end of the world was immanent. replace "immanent" with "imminent"
• there are various duplicate links (see WP:DUPLINK) across the article, for example, Roman Empire and Christendom in the lead section. User:Evad37/duplinks-alt might be helpful.
• The talk page says that the article uses British English. For consistency:
  • replace "center" with "centre"
  • replace "equaled" with "equalled"
  • replace "favored " with "favoured"
  • replace "favor" with "favour"
  • replace "practicing " with "practising"
  • replace "color" with "colour"
  • replace "traveled" with "travelled"
  • replace "behaviors" with "behaviours"

Phlsph7 (talk) 11:13, 12 May 2024 (UTC)

OMG!! This is amazing! Bless you! Thank you! I will get to work on every one of these today. Thank you again. Jenhawk777 (talk) 19:41, 12 May 2024 (UTC)

I copied all of these to the peer review page just in case someone else has an opinion too - cuz that never happens... Jenhawk777 (talk) 19:45, 12 May 2024 (UTC)

I'm happy to hear that the comments were helpful. I have my fingers crossed for your nomination. Phlsph7 (talk) 16:03, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

A thousand blessings on your head!! My electricity was off all day today, and I got almost nothing done. :-( Your second comment made me realize I need better sources for the entire Reformation section, so I am beginning a complete rework of that. You have helped in more ways than you know! Thank you again and again. Jenhawk777 (talk) 23:20, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Relations (philosophy)

The article Relations (philosophy) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Relations (philosophy) for comments about the article, and Talk:Relations (philosophy)/GA1 for the nomination. Well done! If the article is eligible to appear in the "Did you know" section of the Main Page, you can nominate it within the next seven days. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of 750h+ -- 750h+ (talk) 03:24, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

DYK for Relation (philosophy)

On 27 June 2024, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Relation (philosophy), which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that according to some metaphysicians, there are no relations? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Relations (philosophy). You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, Relation (philosophy)), and the hook may be added to the statistics page after its run on the Main Page has completed. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

RoySmith (talk) 00:03, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Dunning-Kruger Effect

You removed the "controversy" section from the Dunning-Kruger effect page. The page now reads like there is no controversy about it at all. (As if the very fact that you removed it, didn't emphasize it?) Is this an accurate reflection on the body of knowledge surrounding it, objectively, or only so in your opinion? I leave this question for you to ponder and research, and to reconsider your contributions to the article to bring it more in line with reflecting the body of knowledge surrounding it. Dagelf (talk) 08:07, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Hello, thanks for your comment and your contributions to the article Dunning–Kruger effect. I assume you are referring to text you added in March 2024, which I removed shortly afterwards. The reason was that the text "mostly repeats information from the section "Explanations", mostly without proper sourcing". If you feel that the section "Explanations" ignores major positions or disagreements, I would be happy to have a look the ignored sources and make adjustments if necessary. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:28, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Existence scheduled for TFA

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Disambiguation link notification for July 3

An automated process has detected that when you recently edited Ontology, you added a link pointing to the disambiguation page Event.

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Solid South article improvements for GA

I believe I added citations for every paragraph that was missing them, and changed the wording in the specific sentences you mentioned. Are there any other issues for Solid South that need improvement for it to merit being a Good Article, per Wikipedia:Good article criteria? JohnAdams1800 (talk) 02:32, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

@JohnAdams1800: Thanks for adding all the references, the sourcing looks much better now! If there are sources for the information in the two tables on the bottom, it might be good to add them before the renomination. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:14, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

I added some additional content and citations to the Solid South article, including citations for the presidential and gubernatorial election results. I'm renominating it for GA, and believe it meets Wikipedia:Good article criteria. JohnAdams1800 (talk) 17:18, 3 August 2024 (UTC)

I hope it works out this time, I have my fingers crossed. Phlsph7 (talk) 07:36, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Tireless Contributor Barnstar
	You're absolutely crazy for taking on the quality improvements on Existence, Philosophy, Communication, Logic, etc., but in the best way possible. I truly admire your work, and though it may be an understatement, I'd like to offer you this barnstar as a token of appreciation for your efforts. joeyquism (talk) 18:35, 25 July 2024 (UTC)

@Joeyquism: Thanks a lot for the appreciation! Phlsph7 (talk) 07:55, 26 July 2024 (UTC)

Ethics

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Promotion of Ethics

Congratulations, Phlsph7! The article you nominated, Ethics, has been promoted to featured status, recognizing it as one of the best articles on Wikipedia. The nomination discussion has been archived.

This is a rare accomplishment and you should be proud. If you would like, you may nominate it to appear on the Main page as Today's featured article. Keep up the great work! Cheers, David Fuchs (talk) via FACBot (talk) 00:05, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

story · music · places

Congratulations, and thank you today for Existence, introduced: "Existence is the state of having reality. Often contrasted with essence, it is a wide and fundamental concept associated with various tricky problems, such as the status of imaginary entities like Santa Claus." --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:11, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

Today I have two "musicians" on the Main page, one is also the topic of my story, watch and listen, - I like today's especially because you see him at work, hear him talk about his work and the result of his work - rare! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:36, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

... and a third, like 22 July but with interview and the music to be played today --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:38, 8 August 2024 (UTC)

On 13 August, Bach's cantata was 300 years old, and the image one. The cantata is an extraordinary piece, using the chorale's text and famous melody more than others in the cycle. It's nice to have not only a recent death, but also this "birthday" on the Main page. And a rainbow in my places. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:49, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

Applause!

When I saw today's front page I wondered if you were the author of the featured article, and lo, you are! I'm not the smallest use to you in reviews because my stolidly earthbound mind does not cope with abstract concepts, but I recognise talent and dedication when I see them, and I take my hat off to you. Tim riley talk 19:12, 6 August 2024 (UTC)

I really appreciate your kind words! I found your comments on my nominations quite helpful, in spite of (or maybe because of) their earthbound perspective. Phlsph7 (talk) 08:07, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Human history

The article Human history you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Human history and Talk:Human history/GA2 for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of AirshipJungleman29 -- AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:04, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Human history

The article Human history you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Human history for comments about the article, and Talk:Human history/GA2 for the nomination. Well done! If the article is eligible to appear in the "Did you know" section of the Main Page, you can nominate it within the next seven days. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of AirshipJungleman29 -- AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:23, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Tireless Contributor Barnstar
	For getting human history to GA. I think you're the only Wikipedian to have two VA1 GAs :) Cerebellum (talk) 10:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't help at the end! --Cerebellum (talk) 10:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

@Cerebellum: Thanks for the barnstar and for all the work you have poured into this article before and during the GA! Phlsph7 (talk) 11:02, 11 August 2024 (UTC)

Algebra

See you did considerable work on Algebra, up to FA? I made a style edit https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Algebra&diff=1245452894&oldid=1244983589, then looked up to see whose work I had changed, and realized it was yours. Happy to revert, discuss. Jd2718 (talk) 02:59, 14 September 2024 (UTC)

Hello Jd2718, thanks for your edit and for raising the point here. I agree that repetitive language should be avoided. I made some adjustments to make sure that no paragraph overuses one term or the other. Phlsph7 (talk) 08:36, 14 September 2024 (UTC)