User talk:Nheoklrgeeurs

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hans Zehetmaier (November 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. More precisely: You need to rewrite this without adjectives of praise, or unsourced statements of purpose, or other tributes. . Give the bio in chronological order. Don;t make vague claims like " Actively involved in the German Parliament's (Bundestag) IT agenda".

You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DGG ( talk ) 03:59, 21 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]