User talk:Elyriz/sandbox

Hell Elyriz,

Good start.

Here are a few suggestions I have:

revise sub-headings, for instance I think "taxonomy" would be more appropriate rather than "History and Naming", also I would change "microscopy" to "Morphology", as well as make a separate section for "primary metabolism" seem like you have a lot of information about it. I would also add a sub-heading for "Identification"
add more wikilinks for words such as conidiogenesis
you've mentioned that its not pathogenic, but has been associated with a few medical conditions. In those instances, is there any special treatment required? or the conventional treatment would be able to cure the manifestations of this fungus?
references should be cited prior to punctuation marks

Overall, great job and so much information!

Zhmurcha (talk) 19:29, 29 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Assignment Feedback

Fantastic work on your article so far! You have a lot of good information on Sporobolomyces salmonicolor, I suggest including some points on whether it affects organisms other than humans, if possible. Other than that, I suggest proofreading for spelling and grammar, as well as sentence structure. I look forward to reading the final version of your article! YaeRamKim (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]