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On your userpage take some notes on this organizational history for each article. (If you don't already have running notes for your articles from the last activity, you can start them now). Note any editors who created and significantly intervened in the article, especially for organization.

Girl Scouts of the USA

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  • Grammatical edits such as fixing typos (spelling) and punctuation
  • Changed structure by reorganizing information

Significant editors: Srich32977

Balanced anesthesia

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  • Significant edit: "Rewrote lead and added detail and sources to new section in body. Needs much more work: lots about veterinary practice, more needed on human health. Some sections seem out of scope or overly detailed for this article"
  • Lots of adding links and removing wrong links
  • Grammar and sentence structure was a mess
  • Issues with tone

Creator: Rosguill

Significant editors: AukusRuckus, Kimen8