User:Aubreyriess

Article evaluation

I visited the Phonograph Record page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Its detail, citations, and grammar.

The article is very well written. The detail is extensive going way back and showing the history of vinyl records. The writer even includes different type of vinyl and its origin and how its used with an accurate timeline. It's citations are working well and each go to a website that is reliable. There's some places throughout the article that deserve to have a citation especially because there are some places that have quotations yet no citation. The grammar in the article is good, all sentences flow together easily and there is no misspelling. I edited one of the sentences to make it more clear and add some reasoning behind it. All together the article is very clear and educating, with some very minor changes it could be a perfect, reliable source.

My name is Aubrey Ries, I'm 17 years old and am apart of the running start program at Everett Community College. I love writing, making up stories or even writing essays are some things I surprisingly like doing. I aspire to become a teacher later on in life and have thought about being an English major. Some things I enjoy in life are my family, friends, and playing soccer.

There are many things I could see myself writing in Wikipedia. I enjoy reading non-fiction books, so could create an article about some of my favorite readings. I love anything that is about mysteries, like documentaries and TV shows I watch could be a topic i'd enjoy creating articles about. I really like to play soccer so I may even take part in reading some articles about that as well.