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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 00:26, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Yad Sarah

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  • ... that one out of every two Israeli families has been helped by Yad Sarah, which lends out medical and rehabilitative equipment for home use, free of charge?

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 00:27, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

  • Checks out. I rewrote the hook to avoid passive voice. – Muboshgu (talk) 02:40, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that Yad Sarah helps one out of every two Israeli families by lending medical and rehabilitative equipment for home use free of charge?
  • Hi Muboshgu, thanks for the review. The rewrite is a little misleading, though, and underemphasizes what is a pretty impressive survey result. I can't think of writing it in any other than the passive voice, though. What do you think about this alt?
  • ALT2: ... that Yad Sarah, the largest national volunteer organization in Israel, has over 6,000 volunteers – including its founder, Uri Lupolianski, former mayor of Jerusalem? Yoninah (talk) 17:26, 10 December 2011 (UTC)