Overall: Article is well balanced, sourced and written from a neutral point of view. It is new enough, as it has been moved from draftspace within the last 7 days and the earwig tool found no signs of copyright violation or plagiarism. The hooks are interesting enough and the sources provided are reliable. Well done, WolverineXI(talk to me) 10:19, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
personally, i feel that the original hook is suitable (because of the image) also bc i have less than 5 dyk noms, qpq doesn't really apply to me (yet) brachy08(chat here lol) 10:41, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
If that's the case, then you should probably remove the second hook. WolverineXI(talk to me) 10:46, 24 September 2024 (UTC)