Talk:Wrap Me Up (Jimmy Fallon and Meghan Trainor song)/GA1
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Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 20:24, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 08:28, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing this for GARC :) Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 08:28, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Prose and content
[edit]Fallon had always wanted to work with Trainor
would be best to give this in quote form- Do you know why Trainor was nervous on the call?
The music video
for "Wrap Me Up"Jimmy Fallon (left) and Meghan Trainor (right).
you don't have to say left and right haha, the reader can figure it out.thought that like everything associated with Trainor—it was incredibly catchy
can this be reworded to comment on the similarity to Trainor's other work, rather than it being catchy, as the previous sentence has already made this comment
Suggestions
[edit]Fallon claimed that he really liked the holidays
MOS:SAID"Wrap Me Up" is two minutes and 28 seconds long.
MOS:NUMERALS says "Comparable values nearby one another should be all spelled out or all in figures"Randy Merrill mastered it
MOS:SOB, consider "the track was mastered by ..." or "mastering was performed by ..."
Sources
[edit]- [3] I would say fusion is an inappropriate descriptor as it implies individual songs are a fusion of comedy and traditional songs.
- [6a] (although I am unsure of the reliability of Qobuz, I have asked at RSN here)
- [9a]
- [12] Although I don't know what this source is adding, and it reads as a listicle. Can be cut.
- [15] is this in a video?
- [18]
- [21]
Other
[edit]- Neutral
- Stable
- Broad / summary style Not much to write, but meets standard
- No OR / COPYVIO
- Images appropriately captioned / illustrated