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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:51, 3 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • Lead looks very well. No issues here.
Flight
  • "He had a total flight time of 6,458, of which 85 hours was" --> "He had a total flight time of 6,458 hours, of which 85 were"
  • "The aircraft had during the morning of 6 May been used" Why not put "been used" before "during the morning"?
  • "which is received permission to" which is? You can remove "permission to" to avoid breaking the sentence.
  • "The first first point on the checklist"...
  • "Three second later" Seconds
Cause
  • Nothing here
Salvage
  • Good
Aftermath
  • Nothing here