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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 01:03, 21 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Plot" section: Please link the actors names after the people they play.
  • Also, link Wesley Crusher.
  • I'm glad you noted "Where No One has Gone Before," but please also note the Traveler returns in a later episode which signals the end of Wesley Crusher's appearances on TNG.
  • Done. Amusingly enough, Keith DeCandido posted his re-watch of that episode only a week ago. Hopefully he'll move onto DS9 once he's done with TNG as his re-watches in particular are very useful. Miyagawa (talk) 21:51, 21 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Themes is a little short of a section. I'd suggest it be either expanded or merged into another section.
  • When you mention Argyle, it isn't immediately clear that LaForge isn't chief engineer yet. You might want to explain this.
  • Just one duplicate link again (Robert Justman)!
  • One of the external links is returning a soft 404. Any chance you could check it out?
  • The images appear to be properly licensed. Dab links are fine.
  • Similarly to Themes, I think release should be folded into the reception section.
  • I think you should put some info in the reception section in the lead, so it properly summarizes the entire article.
On hold pending improvements. —Ed!(talk) 02:29, 21 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Great work! Passing the GA. —Ed!(talk) 02:15, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]