Talk:Wasswa Serwanga/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:21, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:51, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• "Ugandan-born" get rid of born. According to the early life section, it looks like he IS Ugandan.
  • Changed.
• Add NFL and AFL to lead.
  • Added.
• Added cat
• Any later life?
  • No articles that I could find. There's two California "Wasswa Serwanga"s on LinkedIn – one here and one here (the second one is definitely him, the first I can't tell as it doesn't let me view the whole thing). Should I add something from there?
• You forgot to add the PFA cite for his 5 AFL starts.
  • I did? PFA is ref 1 and I read He appeared in five games for the Avengers, all as a starter, totaling 37 tackles, four pass breakups, an interception and a forced fumble.[1][35]
• He had 31 solo tackles and 6 assisted in the AFL. Body just says 31.
  • Fixed.
• I changed the high school formatting in the infobox, not wrong though but that's the standard now so whatever.

I think that's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:51, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: Responded. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

  The AFL counted assists as half tackles, so I revised the infobox and body accordingly. Everything is good now. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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