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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Z1720 (talk21:33, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk). Self-nominated at 17:28, 15 June 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: y

@Sammi Brie: The original hook is fine. I'm aware that hooks "that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals ... should be avoided", and think a version of ALT1 would be acceptable. For ALT1, is there a reason to use "politicians" rather than a more direct equivalent of, or the actual phrase, "state legislators"? I also think there are better ways to phrase ALT1, but if you're happy to stick with the original hook then no need to worry about that. "Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:06, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • The use of both "parents" and "children" seems a bit complicated. I had in mind something along the lines "...that two state legislators got into a fight in the parking lot of Radio Mambí in Miami after the father of one politician insulted the other's father on the station?" but now I've written it down I'm not sure it's really an improvement. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:55, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1a: ... that two state representatives got into a fight in the parking lot of Miami's Radio Mambí after one's father insulted the other's on the air? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/103795124/2-state-reps-duke-it-out-in-radio/
Yes, I think so. Happy with the original hook and with ALT1a, with a slight preference for the latter. Thanks, Sammi Brie. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:48, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]