Talk:Typhoon Ewiniar (2024)/GA1

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Nominator: HurricaneEdgar (talk · contribs) 00:02, 1 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will complete a review of this article within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:39, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

Strong winds and flooding caused power outages and disruptions of transport,... The wording here is awkward- change to "transportation disruptions"
...with eleven domestic flights and one international flights affected. change to "one international flight"
In Bicol, four people were injured and almost 6,000 people were stranded in ports... Add a comma after the word injured.
After Ewiniar left the Philippines, Lucena, Quezon was declared in a state of calamity. Add a comma after Quezon

2. Verifiable
Passes Earwig. No concerns with the reliability of the sources (they are all government sources or reliable news agencies).

By 18:00 UTC that same day, Ewiniar had intensified into a typhoon, marking it as the first typhoon of the 2024 Pacific typhoon season;... Ref 22 does not support the claim that this was the first typhoon of the season.

3. Broad
This article covers all the information you would expect a tropical cyclone article to cover.

4. Neutral
No concerns here.

5. Stable

I noticed in the last few days there's been a dispute on whether or not to include the year in the short description, has this been resolved?

6. Illustrated
The images used have proper licensing and are relevant.

One question, the image in the Preparations section gives the name Tropical Depression Aghon, but the other images use Ewiniar even when the storm was near/in the Philippines. Would it make more sense to call in Ewiniar in all the image captions?