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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC) Per your IRC request yesterday, I will be reviewing this article.[reply]

  • "The Intertropical Convergence Zone (ITCZ) migrated northward into the southern Gulf of Mexico in mid-June. " I'd reword this to "During mid-June, the Intertropical Convergence Zone (ITCZ) made its annual migration northward into the southern Gulf of Mexico" or sometihng like that as something does not feel right in this sentence, idk why tbh. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "However, the storm began to weaken due to increasing wind shear, drier air, and upwelling, caused by Debby's slow movement.[1]" Per above, say the upwelling was of cold water and why (because it was stationary. YE Pacific Hurricane 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "on June 24.[15] resulting in widespread flash flooding.[13]" comma after 24, not period. YE Pacific Hurricane
  • "Throughout Polk County, 115 homes were damaged, mainly as a result of tornadoes, and losses were estimated at $5 million.[24] A tornado in Hardee County felled several trees and damaged a tractor and barn." add an a before "barn". YE Pacific Hurricane 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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