Talk:Terror of the Zygons/GA1
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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 16:52, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 09:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one, the article seems very well written. I'll add remarks in an half an hour's time. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 09:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- which was the first broadcast in four weekly parts→which was first broadcast in four weekly parts Done
- ... and Harry Sullivan. It features the final regular appearances by Nicholas Courtney (as Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart) and by Marter.→and Harry Sullivan, with the episode featuring Marter's and Nicholas Courtney's (as Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart) final regular appearances. or any phrasing which lists Marter first Done
Production
[edit]- Expand all three sub-sections, see Genesis of the Daleks#Production(GotD), not necessarily as long, but still need some expansion
Broadcast and Reception
[edit]- Write the viewer numbers and add AI values in a new paragraph(see GotD).
- Para 3: the amount of parentheses look weird, consider removing the years, as they are not necessary
References
[edit]- Ref 3: Is Banks a typo of Barns, or is it not linked? Done
- Ref 20: The SFX ref redirects, add usurped to status, so that it links only to the archived version Done
- Ref 21: A.V. Club ref is dead Done
- Ref 27: Babelcolor does not seem reliable, find another ref
- Per MOS: CONSISTENT, add wikilinks to all or none of the refs
Overall
[edit]@OlifanofmrTennant: Article looks good, needs expansion in one section, and some minor changes. I'll do source spot-checking in my second read-through. It looks well on the way to GA. Good luck! DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 10:15, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
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