Talk:Taketoyo Line/GA2
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Nominator: AlphaBetaGamma (talk · contribs) 02:09, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 08:02, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Expect initial remarks in 24-48 hours. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 08:02, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Gave the article a glance, along with GA1, and the article seems to have a lot of issues. I'll list some of them right now, and try to help you fix them, as I do not want to quickfail it.
Lead
[edit]- There should be no refs in lead section
Basic Data
[edit]- Remove section, data is in infobox
- Infobox
- What do the numbers in the route map mean? Explain somewhere, probably 'Operations and Services'
Images
[edit]- Add caption to give context
References
[edit]I'll check the validity of the references later, but are there no english sources for any of this?
Abolished and Closed Sections
[edit]Add sentences, do not just list the sections
Overall
[edit]- Needs copyediting in general(I'll help a bit)
There is more, I'll list everything in the next few days. I honestly do not know if the article will pass (as this does not like just a week or two long task), but I hope to at least help for the next time in case I quick fail, AlphaBetaGamma. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 18:55, 14 October 2024 (UTC)