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Good articleSalsa Big Band has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 20, 2018Good article nomineeListed
June 16, 2024Good topic candidateNot promoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on December 31, 2017.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Salsa Big Band by Panamanian artists Rubén Blades and Roberto Delgado & Orquesta won the 2017 Latin Grammy Award for Album of the Year?
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Salsa Big Band/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 05:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I love Ruben Blades! I will start the review soon. Basilisk4u (talk) 05:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

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Intro

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  • "Nine had been previously recorded by him" --> "He had previously recorded nine of the songs" sounds a little better
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:07, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The main inspiration for Blades to record the album was his admiration for the work..." --> "Blades' principal inspiration for the album was his admiration..."
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:07, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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  • Looks good!

Repertoire and recording

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  • I would begin the "Rubén [Blades] always contributes with innovative ideas" quote with an introduction, something like "Delgado said of the creative process "[insert quote]"
Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:07, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and some musicians played two or more instruments, 'so it will be necessary to hire local musicians while on tour, to be faithful to its original sound.'", this quote seems to be unrelated to the rest of the sentence. Maybe clarify it a bit.
Can you help me with this one, I do not know how to clarify this. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:07, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I made it into two sentences because I felt that they were two separate ideas. Basilisk4u (talk) 13:01, 19 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • No concerns here.

Overall

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This is a great article overall. I will put the review on hold for concerns to be addressed. Good job! Basilisk4u (talk) 22:23, 16 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much. Javier Espinoza (talk) 00:07, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The article is very close to passing, but I was wondering if you could add a couple music samples? I always feel that those improve the article greatly for people who haven't listened to the music before. Basilisk4u (talk) 13:01, 19 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Awesome job, passing the article now. Basilisk4u (talk) 15:44, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]