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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sarias952. Peer reviewers: Abigailbarnes, Mlopez96.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:53, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Article Peer Review

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I had never heard of the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights before, so this was very exciting and informative to read. I particularly like how the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights is addressed as both an organization and a series of local actions, as I feel this adds depth to the article. As I was reading I noticed the following:

  • I think it would be helpful to give a brief explanation of how immigrants gained the capacity to regulate their immigration status.
  • There are some areas where the grammar could be tightened up to make the writing more clear.
  • The sources are formatted a little strangely, but I'm not sure how you would address this.

Overall I liked the composition of the article - the overlying chronological layout with emphasis on organizations and important actor Nativo Lopez-Vigil. I think with a little elaboration and refinement this will informative and lovely to read! Good Luck! Abigailbarnes (talk) 17:52, 4 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]