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Good articleLiberty Walk has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 2, 2012Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Liberty Walk/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) 02:28, 19 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]


1111tomica, please withdraw so that others can have the opportunity to review. If no one has done so by the time you're ready to start the review, you certainly can have it back. Two Hearted River (paddle / fish) 23:46, 14 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will finally start the review! I am apologizing you Till I Go Home for your waiting, I hope you understand. — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox
Lead

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  • Cyrus explained that lyrical inspiration for the song was from female empowerment. ---> Cyrus explained that the theme of female empowerment was a lyrical inspiration for the song. — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which consists of rapped verses by the singer. ---> Musically, "Liberty Walk" is an uptempo dance-pop song which also contains rapped verses. — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles Billboard component chart ---> "Liberty Walk" peaked at number three on the U.S. Billboard Bubbling Under Hot 100 Singles chart (sometimes it reads better when is simple ;)) — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Background and inspiration

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  • Cyrus explained the female empowerment behind the lyrical interpretation of "Liberty Walk", saying: ---> Cyrus explained the lyrical inspiration of the song which is about female empowerment, while concluding: — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Composition

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  • Heather Phares of Allmusic noted the song's use... She also noted... It's getting to repetitive. Plus I think you have a grammar mistake in the first sentence. — Tomica (talk) 16:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Critical reception

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How do you mean "lifting"? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:52, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Re-writing it. Not all though. Some parts. — Tomica (talk) 08:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm I changed it up a little bit. If you are uncomfortable with anything specific in it, please say :) Till I Go Home (talk) 10:23, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Live performances and promotional video
  • Link House of Blues, Los Angeles and California

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  • Italicize The Hot Hits Live from LA

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Track listing
Credits and personnel
Charts

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References

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I see that all the issues were addressed. I am passing it. — Tomica (talk) 21:51, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
All in all
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Thaanks :) Till I Go Home (talk)
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There should probably be an article on the automotive "Liberty Walk"

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I don't know enough to write the article, but they seem notable. Google news results Jtle515 (talk) 17:01, 14 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]