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This article needs massive cleanup. He had hired Don Kirshner as a creative consultant, and ive linked from his article, so i hope people will eyeball this and fix it. I have not looked into his notability or even read it beyond a brief scan, but that tells me how badly it needs help.76.234.123.226 (talk) 04:05, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, thats my fixup. Im sure it could be expanded, but i just wanted to remove the promotional tone, so actual notability can be better judged. This is not my area of expertise, but i try to edit any article that needs it with NPOV in mind. If the article is in any way biased or missing important info, please, just find sources and expand it.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 04:55, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
A user with the same name as the article subject has reverted my edits entirely, putting back into the article language which is unambigously inappropriate for an encyclopedia. I really don't want to get into an edit war, esp. with a person claiming to represent Mr. Wishna. I have talked about my changes here, please discuss why you think the article was fine as it stood. I have no problem with any sort of compromise, as i of course dont "own" this article. i just got finished building up the stub on "leisure industry" enough to justify a link to it. im not biased against Mr. Wishna. All i ask is that editors respect WP guidelines, which the reverted text violates in a number of areas.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 16:34, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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