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Reviewer: GleekVampire (talk · contribs) 11:37, 24 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this Good Article nomination. Nominators please be prepared to answer queries raised in the review. —GleekVampire | talk! 11:37, 24 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Early life and modeling career
  • When she was ten, Sushmita Sen won Miss Universe 1994, which turned out to be a defining point in Pinto's life --> Please elaborate. How did Sen's win at Miss Universe become a defining point in her life? Are they related? Does Pinto consider her a role model?
Acting career
Media image and personal life
  • Soon after the release of Slumdog Millionaire, Pinto garnered immense popularity was frequently included among the "Most Beautiful Women in the World" list --> Shouldn't there be a conjunction or something between popularity and was?
  • The same year, Daily Telegraph reported that she was the highest paid Indian actress – she is not considered a Bollywood star as she never appeared in a Bollywood film --> Can you rephrase this sentence? It's a little confusing.

Overall the article looks pretty good. —GleekVampire | talk! 13:45, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: