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Did You Know
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Usmar Ismail's (pictured) Darah dan Doa has been considered both his directorial debut and the first Indonesian film, although he had already directed two films?
On this day...Facts from this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on March 30, 2013, March 30, 2016, March 30, 2017, March 30, 2018, March 30, 2020, March 30, 2022, and March 30, 2023.

GA Review

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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • No dead links, no DAB links
  • Does "National Film Day" deserve to be red linked?
  • Perhaps. I'll link it.22:53, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
  • If I follow Indonesian copyright correctly, this movie in the PD, right? If so a screenshot could be useful for the "plot" section.
  • PD in Indonesia, but films had different copyright terms than photographs when the URAA came into effect (films were 50 post-publication, photographs were 25 post-publication). As such, it's not free in the US. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:53, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Telling the story of the leader of the Siliwangi Division and its leader Captain Sudarto on a march to West Java, ... Confusing sentence, and ambiguous as to the meaning.
  • The "Bahasa Indonesia" language version has the running length at "128 menit" but ours has 48. Which one is it? I also see "Distribusi Spectra Film Exchange" in the other language's infobox. Worth checking out.
  • Footnotes all go to sources. Anwar, Rosihan (2004) and Susanto, A. Budi (2003) need a |trans_title and a |language pararmeter.
  • Perhaps [1] could be used as a reference or external link. According to .id it belongs to the government.

I will review the prose when these comments are responded to. Albacore (talk) 16:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • The URL you used from reference 4 is incorrect.
  • After putting down a communist rebellion in Madiun, killing numerous members of the Communist Party of Indonesia in the process, Sudarto meets with an Indo woman named Connie, who is originally from Bandung. Ambiguous, and I think this sentence should be split.
  • leaving Leo in charge Who was Leo?
  • One night, as he reads his diary, Sudarto is accosted a man whose relatives were killed in Madiun perhaps wikt link accost, and I think you mean "accosted by".
  • There must be a link for "Presidential Palace"

Those are the only concerns I could find. I will pass after these are responded to. Albacore (talk) 23:45, 19 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Quotes

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...often cited as the first "Indonesian" film....

– Why is Indonesian in quotes? Sca (talk) 14:38, 30 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]