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Page Cleanup

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I went through and cleaned the page up. Hope no one minds. I made sure to keep it generally unbiased and neutral. Lenore Schwartz 03:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Now it reads like a commercial advertisement. --Ettrig (talk) 17:13, 19 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nope, it still reads like an ad. It says "designed just for girls" I'm sure this does not refer to girls around the world, i.e. outside a North American/European context. Why would you need the phrase "just for girls" unless you're trying to push a product on impressionable young minds? Why not simply say "targeted at pre-teen and teenage females from reasonably high-income families living in North America and Europe"? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.227.133.212 (talk) 20:07, 16 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]