Talk:Amor Gitano/GA1

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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:36, 25 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Usually, if there is a translation (there is), we place it in the lead in bold next to the title, so readers know what it means right at the top. Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure I would consider Knowles a singer-songwriter. She might be singer and a songwriter, meaning she occasionally writes some music in her songs, but a singer-songwriter is someone that writes and composes all of their own material, McCartney, Lennon, Carey, Dylan, Morissette etc. I highly doubt she does that. Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
If you're going to link Mexican, then why not American Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The song contains a crossover of cultures -> could be better Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
motly Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
the exotic language of Fernández -> ummm, Spanish? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
R&B influences of Knowles -> how dies she do that? Her voice contains R&B infusion? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Knowles see to the writing of the song -> ? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Knowles, Knowles, Knowles Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Knowles herself take to production for the song Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
on the premiere -> during Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
for which it serves as the theme song. -> this whole sentence could be far better Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
was generally received with mixed to positive reception from music critics Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
flamenco-pop that dominates the song's genre -> how does flamenco and pop (which is a genre), dominate a genre? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
offensive due to the stereotypical lyrics -> should give us a sentence on its lyrical content

I need help here. Please. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"Amor Gitano" topped the charts US Hot Latin Songs chart. -> no tiny, choppy sentences plz Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
digital download -> s Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
No sources in infobox. Incorporate it somehow in the article Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Why are the writers not in full name? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
You should link them there under writers Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Recording

The recording came together in a synergy of Sony's biggest talents and greatest assets -> What? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
president OF Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Bad sentence Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
suggested it could be perfect for Fernandez -> felt Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
and the duet was born. -> I didn't know Knowles was pregnant. Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Very funny. According to the press, Beyonce has been pregnant eight times. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You wrote it was recorded in MB as well? Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
as she has yet to relearn the language and so had to learn the sons by imitating the sounds -> tense issues, and language Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
while Knowles created the song with Fernández. -> A). Fernandez had no part in the song except vocals B). Knowles din't create it, she co-wrote and co-produced it Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
her in her Spanish -> its not her Spanish Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
If you weren't the great singer you are, than this would be impossible." -> what does being a good singer have to do with language pronunciation? Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Also, the titles should just be Background and recording, not single selection, that doesn't have part here.
The song later saw -> songs don't see Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
were -> where Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
to all European -> on Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
While promoting the album Viento a Favor, ads favored the collaboration between Fernández and Knowles -> No clue what this means or says Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Music and theme

Songs don't see Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
No choppy sentences Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
the song features negative stereotyping of Romani or Gypsy people. -> how so?

I need help here. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

hints of flamenco-pop as strong lyrics dominate the entire track _> flamenco has nothing to do with "strong lyrics" Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
hints of pop music for which Knowles is generally known -> A). You said she' known for her R&B B). She does nothing to the song to add pop. I don't say Mariah Carey adds Latin infusion to "My All", I say the Latin percussion and guitar arpeggios do Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
melodramatic romantic ballad territory.[ -> c/e Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Additionally described as -> additionally, Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
described as a "commercial pop to the hilt" -> by who? Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
All these quotes need attribution Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:35, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

although most of them noted that the song may be taken offensively due to the stereotypical lyrics -> could be better Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
off of -> from Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
commented on the additional writing and production on the song as over-bearing in a positive way. -> c/e Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
From Walmart? -> This is not a high quality review. We need newspaper articles and magazines, not some employee from Walmart Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know about these Rhapsody and Amazon reviews, I doubt these are high quality for GA Removed Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
strong Latin demographic -> doesn't make sense, the US is like 18 percent Latin Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
until later beaten -> replaced Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Please check this one. Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:42, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Premio amigo 2007, "Amor Gitano" won two categories: Premio amigo a la canción and Tono más descargado para celular. [1]

Charts

Should have sources for both certifications Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:44, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Also, there are quite a few dead links

One fixed by Novice. The two other were working some days ago. What should i do? Jivesh • Talk2Me 13:44, 2 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

- Let me know when you're done the fixes.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:35, 1 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - I'm sorry to butt in middle of the a review, but this song did not reach number-one on the Hot Latin Songs chart. It does not appear in any of the lists of number-one Latin Songs nor on Allmusic. In fact, it did not chart on the Latin Songs at at all. Instead, it reached number twenty-three on the Latin Pop Songs chart. Source. Magiciandude (talk) 04:56, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

But i have also sourced the chart position. Wait i will verify in Billboard archive. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:45, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Jivesh, what Billboard says definitely overrules Walmart. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:48, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I removed it. Jivesh • Talk2Me 12:09, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's fine now. I'm passing it.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 16:52, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]