Draft:Lal Shah Bari

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Declined by CoconutOctopus 3 seconds ago. Last edited by CoconutOctopus 3 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 10 October 2024 by Dan arndt (talk).

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Declined by Dan arndt 113 minutes ago.

Comment: You still have the source which is about a place and the other source is now a study on breaking bad medical news to families, something which doesn't seem at all relevant to the article.
Please find sou4ces actually covering the individual in depth, and ensure the article is longee than a single sentence before resubmitting. CoconutOctopus talk 06:37, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Comment: Requires significant coverage in multiple reliable secondary sources - Scribid is not an acceptable source and the other reference is about a place not the individual. Dan arndt (talk) 04:44, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Syed Lal Shah Bari was a Sufi saint from Garhi Khairo Tehsil, Jacobabad District, Sindh, Pakistan^[1]^[2]

References

^ Shah, Sameena; Usman, Asma; Zaki, Samar; Qureshi, Asra; Lal, Karishma; Uneeb, Saher Nasseb; Bari, Naseem; Hasnani, Fauzia Basaria; Shah, Nasir (2023). "The Role of Family and Culture in The Disclosure of Bad News: A Multicentre Cross-Sectional Study in Pakistan". dx.doi.org. Retrieved 2024-10-10. {{cite web}}: no-break space character in |title= at position 38 (help)
^ "Pir Lal Shah Bari, Pakistan facts". June 2015.

[1] Shah, Sameena; Usman, Asma; Zaki, Samar; Qureshi, Asra; Lal, Karishma; Uneeb, Saher Nasseb; Bari, Naseem; Hasnani, Fauzia Basaria; Shah, Nasir (2023). "The Role of Family and Culture in The Disclosure of Bad News: A Multicentre Cross-Sectional Study in Pakistan". dx.doi.org. Retrieved 2024-10-10. {{cite web}}: no-break space character in |title= at position 38 (help)

[2] "Pir Lal Shah Bari, Pakistan facts". June 2015.

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