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GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 22:41, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:34, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • Added a few cats.
  • "He immediately won the starting job for the St. John's Redmen football team as a freshman that year". Remove "that year". The next sentence begins with that too. 1981 is listed several times. People can assume that was his freshman year.
  • Add "born to Italian immigrants" to that part of the lead so readers understand he is Italian too.

That's all. This one reads very well. Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 01:34, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. Nominator has 248 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:10, 26 September 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Two QPQs done. Pat Ragusa starting expansion seven days before nomination. No OR or copyvio issues found in use of Gelberg source (although perhaps it doesn't need so many repeat citations). Article is otherwise presentable. Alan Pringle similarly expanded within the week timeframe. Can't access the newspaper sources here, but checked the stats ones and they same in order.
    Hook source is Pro Football Reference, who at a quick look around reliable for simple data. The data at any rate aligns with the prose in the articles. This seems good to go. CMD (talk) 06:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]