Talk:Mathias Nkwenti

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Review: September 27, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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Derragatory COmments

It appears that someone made a comment in regards to his child support and lavish flying. I have removed the comment due to no references and it also being malicious SPAM Kcuello (talk) 01:40, 8 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Links

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/212912961/?match=7&terms=nkwenti

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/526391216/?match=6&terms=nkwenti

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/93300337/?match=4&terms=nkwenti

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/89760196/?match=1&terms=nkwenti

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/261439426/?match=6&terms=nkwenti

https://www.profootballarchives.com/players/n/nkwe00200.html

BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:09, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:57, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mathias Nkwenti/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 18:15, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Will review soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe change stint in lead to "short offseason stint".
Added a cat.
Link training camp.
"Famed offensive line coach Joe Moore" Does the source actually say that. I can't see the clipping.

I didn't any other issues. Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:02, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Linked training camp and changed the lead. As for Moore, the source mentions that "[Moore] earned a reputation as one of the best line coaches in NCAA history" – do you think the way I worded it is alright or should I change it? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That looks good. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.