Talk:Madison Kocian/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 3 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 23:21, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

Hello @Riley1012: please see my review below. Good work, just some suggestions below to consider implementing. I found an issue with sourcing in the spotcheck below so I'll do another one after you have a chance to respond to this review. Please let me know if there are any issues with my comments. Thank you. Kimikel (talk) 23:21, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

@Kimikel: Okay, thank you. I believe I have addressed everything. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:49, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

@Riley1012: Just went through again and after reviewing it, there's nothing amiss. Thank you for your quick responses, and congratulations! Kimikel (talk) 22:30, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

Well-written

• Woga Classic is wikilinked 6 times throughout this article, just once would suffice. same with the U.S. Classic, the City of Jesolo Trophy, Ashton Locklear, etc.

•  Done

Early life

• "whom Kocian has" > who Kocian

•  Done

Junior elite career

• "Then at the City of Jesolo Trophy" > remove then

•  Done

Senior elite career

• "vault and uneven bars where" > the vault and the uneven bars, where
• "Then at the U.S. Classic," > remove then
• "Then at the U.S. Championships" > remove then
• wikilink floor exercise

"she again finished second to Locklear on the uneven bars, and she placed fifth on the balance beam."> she again finished second to Locklear on the uneven bars and also placed fifth on the balance beam.

• "rule with Biles" > rule, with Biles
• wikilink radius
• "at the U.S. Classic competing only" > at the U.S. Classic, competing only
• "Then at the U.S. Championships" > remove then
• "a first-ever four-way" > an unprecedented four-way
• "Russians Viktoria Komova and Daria Spiridonova," > Russians Viktoria Komova, Daria Spiridonova,
• "National Team members attended" > National Team members, attended
• "Olympic-hopefuls" > Olympic hopefuls
• "Then at the U.S. Olympic Trials" > remove then

• All  Done

College career

• wikilink labrum
• "competing on only balance beam" > competing only on the balance beam
• "PAC-12 Championships" > Pac-12 Championships
• "at the BYU, Utah State tri-meet" > at a tri-meet with BYU and Utah State, / also wikilink BYU and Utah State
• "She was nominated by UCLA for the NCAA Woman of the Year Award." > worth mentioning the result
• "at Baylor College of Medicine" > at the Baylor College of Medicine

• All  Done

Personal life

• This section looks a little anemic. I would consider adding Kocian's comments about refusing to return to elite competition at the bottom of [1], since I think it's worth noting and would flesh out that section a little more

•  Done I added some more information I found.

Verifiable

• The fact that her middle name is Taylor is never sourced anywhere
• The coaches listed in her infobox aren't sourced anywhere and don't appear in the article

•  Done

Spot check

• 73: Verified
• 40: Doesn't mention gold medals

•  Done

• 16: Verified
• 32: Verified
• 80: Verified

Neutral, Broad, Stable, Illustrated

• All good in these categories. Images' licenses are all properly tagged.

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